In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advatantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is said that in nearest future transport forms
such
as
,
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cars
, buses,and trucks will be powered by artificial
intelligence
rather than
humans
. The only people commuting inside
these car
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will be commuters. In my opinion, the merits of
driverless
cars
outweight
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outweigh
the demerits. On the one hand, there are several drawbacks
of
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using self-driving
cars
.
Firstly
, the cost of
driverless
vehicles
is extremely expensive compared to traditional
cars
.
This
is because it manufactures
from
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expensive materials, which
this
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can make
driverless
cars
not
better
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choice for individuals.
Secondly
,
vehicles
powered by artificial
intelligence
can have a negative impact on
the
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society. To illustrate, using
driverless
cars
can
leads
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to
increase
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the
umemployment
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unemployment
employment
.
For example
, there are employees who work as drivers
for
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transfer
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the
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goods from
city
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to
other
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, by
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self-driving
cars
these jobs will disappear.
As a result
, the rate of crime and poverty will
increase
.
Although
the downsides mentioned above, I would like to argue that the benefits of
driverless
vehicles
outweigh the drawbacks. The first
advatantage
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advantage
,
cars
powered by artificial
intelligence
can contribute to
reduce
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the number of accidents
,
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because
the
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most accidents
in
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our roads result
of
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humans
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errors namely, sudden stop or turn.
Therefore
,
this
can will reduce likely
for
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people to get injuries or even
death
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,
also
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will assist to
increase
life
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expectancy of populations. The second
advatantage
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advantage
, self-driving
vehicles
can use
the
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fuel efficiently when compared to
humans
.
For instance
,
the
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humans
sometimes
driving
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overspeed or
using
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a lot of
break
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, which
this
habits can
increase
the consumption of fuel.
Thus
, self-driving
vehicles
can reduce Co2 emissions and contribute to
mitigate
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climate change
as well as
global warming. In conclusion,
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my perspective, the
advatantages
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advantages
of
vehicles
powered by artificial
intelligence
outweight
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outweigh
outweighs
the disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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