In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
The cost of living differs
according to
which country
you are in. The expenses of staying in a country
like the Philippines vary greatly compared to the United States. I believe it is only beneficial to live away from your family if it is the norm or you are financially capable of sustaining a life in your chosen area for university.
In countries like the Philippines, university students often live with their parents
due to
financial constraints and culture. It is the norm for the parents
there to support
their children
all throughout their education and students often don't have jobs. Which implies that they won't have the funds to move away. Additionally
, Filipino parents
often provide transportation and allowances to allow their children
to focus more on their education. However
, this
hinders the independence and freedom of students as they are still under the supervision of their parents
. But with no means to support
themselves, in this
instance, the disadvantages of moving out would outweigh the advantages.
In the United States, it is the norm for children
over 18 to move out and support
themselves. They are able to do that because people under the age of 18 are allowed to have jobs and parents
are more open for their children
to work. They would have the financial means to support
themselves and provide basic needs such
as housing and food. Furthermore
, the experience of being away would help them grow to be more independent and have more control over their life. So, if they are financially capable, then
moving out would be beneficial as this
would allow new experiences to improve as a person and discover themselves in a new light.
To conclude
, the variables to consider in living away from home vary from country
to country
due to
variables such
as finances and culture. You have to look at your present situation and how it reflects your future and decide whether or not it is in your best interest to move away.Submitted by erickacasandra.abas on
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task achievement
You provide a solid response to the task by discussing both sides of the argument. However, ensure your position on whether the benefits of living away outweigh the disadvantages is a bit more explicit throughout the essay.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly link your ideas between paragraphs to maintain coherence, perhaps by using linking words or phrases.
task achievement
You effectively discuss and contrast the situations in two different countries, which enhances the task response by providing relevant and specific examples.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are well-articulated, summarizing the main points effectively.
coherence cohesion
The structure of your essay is logical, with distinct paragraphs focusing on specific aspects of the topic.
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