Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times it has

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noticed that a lot of museums collect entrance fees whilst some don't. In my ,opinion I believe that the pros of collecting

money

on entering the

museum

are more than the cons and

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essay will state the reasons for my opinion. Some disadvantages of collecting admission fees from

people

can include a reduction in accessibility by all members of the community or a decrease in the freelance of

people

to appreciate some historical models,

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the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly

,

money

generated from the admission of

people

into the

museum

can be used in the maintenance of

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which includes ensuring that the environment is kept clean, all items are cleaned and the environment is beautified and appealing to the sight of viewers.

For example

, in Abeokuta Nigeria, museums that generate entry funds from

people

have always been reported to be neater and more

people

tend to go there

instead

of the free access

museum

.

Secondly

, charging

people

coming to the

museum

before they can gain access to the place gives

people

a sense of responsibility to care for the things in the

museum

and avoid damaging them in the process of admiring those items and

this

can avoid extinctions of some important works of arts or historical models.

Furthermore

, the

money

realized from the entrance fees can be used to employ some casual workers thereby reducing the unemployment rate in the community and

this

can

also

ensure the smooth running of the organization's affairs. In conclusion, receiving some token of

money

for accessibility fee to the

museum

helps to ensure orderliness and the smooth of activities ,

however

, measures should be taken to avoid

people

from extortion of tourist lovers via the means