Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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noticed that a lot of museums collect entrance fees whilst some don't. In my ,opinion I believe that the pros of collecting

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on entering the

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are more than the cons and

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essay will state the reasons for my opinion. Some disadvantages of collecting admission fees from

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can include a reduction in accessibility by all members of the community or a decrease in the freelance of

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to appreciate some historical models,

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the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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,

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generated from the admission of

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into the

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can be used in the maintenance of

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which includes ensuring that the environment is kept clean, all items are cleaned and the environment is beautified and appealing to the sight of viewers.

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, in Abeokuta Nigeria, museums that generate entry funds from

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have always been reported to be neater and more

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tend to go there

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of the free access

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.

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, charging

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coming to the

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before they can gain access to the place gives

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a sense of responsibility to care for the things in the

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and avoid damaging them in the process of admiring those items and

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can avoid extinctions of some important works of arts or historical models.

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, the

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realized from the entrance fees can be used to employ some casual workers thereby reducing the unemployment rate in the community and

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can

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ensure the smooth running of the organization's affairs. In conclusion, receiving some token of

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for accessibility fee to the

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helps to ensure orderliness and the smooth of activities ,

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, measures should be taken to avoid

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from extortion of tourist lovers via the means