Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, the technologies of the smartphone have become popular among youngsters. Worryingly, the advancement of phones

such

as social media has affected them in the way of communicate. The

reason

for

this

trend is the flexibility of smartphones for the users,

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it can be solved by encouraging them to do an outdoor activity and reducing the

screen

time in daily activities. One undoubtedly

reason

why they spend more

times

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on

screen

is social media. The trend

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for

this

reason

made almost young generations nowadays stay at their home and have conversations with their relatives or friends.

Furthermore

, the usage of

this

technology is because the shape of cellphones is almost friendly in which it can be used wherever the user is. Still, almost teenagers now have their own

smartphone

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in their hands,

therefore

, many of them choose to stay online. Fortunately, outdoor activities can be used in order to persuade teenagers to have eye contact with each other.

This

can be done with

for example

volunteering events and

this

practice will likely increase their interest in having a good relationship in society because they are forced to help people willingly.

In addition

, another way to make people stay outside is by reducing their

screen

time

while

at home.

This

is because the most common of teenagers to stay inside is they still can have a chat

while

laying in bed. In conclusion, the main

reason

people

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conversations online is because of the flexibility of smartphones,

however

, it can be solved by adding social

exposures

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to them and limiting their time on

screen

.