The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph highlights information about the amount of money which was spent on bananas in four different territories, over a ten-
year
period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentages related to three countries in the names of Japan, France and Germany experienced fluctuation trends
while
the portion of the USA saw a small increase and remained stable over the period in question. Looking at the details, Japan was the head country where sold bananas expensive ly at which point its ratio started at 2$ in 1996 but
then
hit a peak at 3$ in the following
year
, and
then
its prices were from 2 to 2,5 $ for several
years
and
finally
, in 2003 hit a tough at 1,5 $ but
then
improved to 2,5 $ in 2004.
Additionally
, the price of
this
fruit was 2$ for three
years
Initially
in France and it decreased to 1,5 $ in 1999,experiencing a fluctuation trend the next
year
and remaining at 2$ in the
last
two
years
. If we look at Germany, it commenced at 1,5 $, it fluctuated by 1999 but
then
it improved to 2 $ in 2002 and again it declined to under 2 $ in the remaining
years
. Regarding the USA, it commenced at 1$ in 1996 and remained stable for one
year
, and from 1998 until the
last
year
it only saw a small growth.
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