These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society, which means people use things in a short time and then throw them away. What are the Causes of this and what problems can this cause?

It is certainly true that today
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most individuals around the world adopt
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that throw-away of
products
after
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period of time rather than use
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long
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peried
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period
periods
. There are several reasons why
people
use
goods
for
short
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time, and
also
this
trend can bring
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detrimental consequences for
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. Regarding reasons,
Firstly
, the
goods
are inexpensive, which means
people
can purchase
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worrying about the price.
This
is because these days shopping online has become more popular, and many websites provide
products
with competitive
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.
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,
Amazon
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website
provide
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a wide range of
products
such
as
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smartphones, washing machines,
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with
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cheap price, which
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motivate
people
to buy new things
instead
of
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repair
onces
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ones
.
Secondly
, in some
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people
face challenges to find professional workers who can
repair
old
products
.
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,
people
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who live in rural areas there are
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enough workers who can
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, even if
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skillful
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the cost of
repair
higher
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than
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a new good, and
then
people
prefer to buy new
products
in order to save money and effort. In
term
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of problems,
this
phenomena
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can have a negative
impacts
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on the ecosystem.
This
is because increase demand
on
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goods
will increase
deforestion
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deforestation
,
this
because the most of
prodcuts
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products
produce result of cut down
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trees.
Furthermore
,
forest
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provide habitats for animals cut the forest down can
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to
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of
ainimals
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animals
. The second negative impact,
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most
goods
manufacture from unrecyclable materials.
In other words
,
throw
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away
the
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goods
in oceans,
river
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,
lake
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can
leads
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to water pollution, because the most of materials contain from plastic, which
this
material harmful to marine life
and
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in future will we face
shortage
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a shortage
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in
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fresh water.
To sum up
, the main reasons behind
culture
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the culture
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of throw-away are, the
goods
is
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inexpensive, lack of professional workers to
repair
old
goods
,
however
,
this
trend can
leads
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lead
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to environmental issues.
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