You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to request you if you could accept my son in your school.I got a job transfer from Surrey to Abbotsford;

therefore

,we have to migrate to a new city.As it is the middle of the year so it is a humbly request to you accept my son as a student of your school. Sukh is my son who is extremely good at studies.He has won a lot of prizes from his academy including sports awards.He is a captain of the Soccer team

as well as

has a great interest in science.From the

last

exams,he got 98 marks out of 100 in Science.He intended to be a Scientist and your institute is well known for Science studies.Considering his interest and your way of teaching could help him to be successful in his life;

hence

,would be beneficial for your record to attract more scholars.It would be a win-win situation. Thank you to consider my situation. Yours faithfully, Raman

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6 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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