The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the data about the
price
of bananas in four countries throughout the period of 9 years.
Overall
, every
country
except France increased
at the end
of the following period. The
country
that witnessed the least changes was the USA.
Firstly
, the
country
in which the
price
of bananas rose the most was Japan. The next
country
which significantly went up was Germany. At the beginning of the period, Japan had the highest prices of bananas in comparison to other countries. In 2004 it reached the
price
of 2.5
while
Germany had 1.5 at the start and got to almost 2 in 2004.
Furthermore
,
although
France fluctuated throughout the years and the lowest point was in 1999 with a
price
of 1.5, in 2004 it came to a start
price
of 2. The USA had the smallest score in 1996 (1),
however
, it slightly went up in the following years to 1.5, after that, it again gradually declined and end up at a little bit less than 1.5 in the
last
year.
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