Some people think that scientific work on plants and animals is good. Others think it is dangerous. Discuss both views.
These days,
research
development about the beneficial effects of plants and animals
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is
are hugely increase
. Change the verb form
are hugely increasing
Although
it has several potential risks to human beings, the merits from
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of
research
on living creatures
could help human
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humans
especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
health
aspect. Add an article
the health
This
essay will elaborate Change preposition
on these
these two point
of Change the determiner
this two point
these two points
views
about scientific work on plants and Fix the agreement mistake
view
animals
.
Earth provide
humanChange the verb form
provides
a
lot of advantages Change preposition
with a
plans
and Correct word choice
and plans
animals
to be consumed, yet only 5% plan
in Change preposition
of plan
this
world were identified. However
, not only to
be consumed but Fix the infinitive
apply
also
they
have nice components and vitamins for increasing Correct pronoun usage
apply
human's
health, we know Change noun form
human
it
as plan medicine. Ginger, Correct pronoun usage
them
for instance
, it
has a lot of beneficial substances for Correct pronoun usage
apply
individual's
body and has a warming effect. Correct article usage
an individual's
In addition
, several people
believed that snake's blood will heal people
with cancer, while
until now researcher
in medicine have not Fix the agreement mistake
researchers
gave
any strong statement yet about Change the verb form
given
this
. Consequently
, due to
reduce the hoax news and avoiding society consume wrong
parts of wild Correct article usage
the wrong
creatures
, researchers play a pivot
role to identify and give validation of consumption.
Replace the word
pivotal
On the other hand
, it has potential
dangerous since there are many Change the word
potentially
creatures
that predicted will extinct. Moreover
, reseachers
might unlock poisonous substances from Correct your spelling
researchers
plans
or Correct your spelling
plants
animals
and community
will use Correct article usage
the community
it
for their own needs. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, in certain region
in Indonesia, Fix the agreement mistake
regions
people
eat a poisonous flower to sucide
. Even though by Correct your spelling
suicide
publish
the list of dangerous Change the verb form
publishing
plans
or animals
, individuals could use it for wrong
aims. Correct article usage
the wrong
In addition
wild creatures
also
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are also
in
dangerous because researchers published a statement that they have huge Change preposition
apply
benefit
to heal severe illnesses. Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
Hence
, inventions and research
about creatures
potential benefit will Change noun form
creatures'
creature's
turns
into disaster, if the government did not establish a strict rule.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
turn
human
need Fix the agreement mistake
humans
researcher
to identify all Fix the agreement mistake
researchers
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
plans
and animals
to ensure their safety. Meanwhile, these scientific works could trigger bad people
to do illegal things. Unless the government take this
seriously, our research
environment on living creatures
will always have dangerous potential.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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