Some people think that scientific work on plants and animals is good. Others think it is dangerous. Discuss both views.

These days,
research
development about the beneficial effects of plants and
animals
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are hugely increase
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.
Although
it has several potential risks to human beings, the merits
from
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research
on living
creatures
could help
human
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humans
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especially
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in
health
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aspect.
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essay will elaborate
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on these
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these two point
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of
views
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about scientific work on plants and
animals
. Earth
provide
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human
a
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with a
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lot of advantages
plans
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and plans
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and
animals
to be consumed, yet only 5%
plan
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of plan
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in
this
world were identified.
However
, not only
to
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be consumed but
also
they
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have nice components and vitamins for increasing
human's
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human
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health, we know
it
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them
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as plan medicine. Ginger,
for instance
,
it
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apply
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has a lot of beneficial substances for
individual's
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an individual's
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body and has a warming effect.
In addition
, several
people
believed that snake's blood will heal
people
with cancer,
while
until now
researcher
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researchers
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in medicine have not
gave
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given
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any strong statement yet about
this
.
Consequently
,
due to
reduce the hoax news and avoiding society consume
wrong
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parts of wild
creatures
, researchers play a
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role to identify and give validation of consumption.
On the other hand
, it has
potential
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dangerous since there are many
creatures
that predicted will extinct.
Moreover
,
reseachers
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researchers
might unlock poisonous substances from
plans
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plants
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or
animals
and
community
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the community
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will use
it
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them
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for their own needs.
For example
, in certain
region
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in Indonesia,
people
eat a poisonous flower to
sucide
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suicide
. Even though by
publish
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publishing
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the list of dangerous
plans
or
animals
, individuals could use it for
wrong
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the wrong
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aims.
In addition
wild
creatures
also
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in
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dangerous because researchers published a statement that they have huge
benefit
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benefits
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to heal severe illnesses.
Hence
, inventions and
research
about
creatures
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creatures'
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potential benefit will
turns
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turn
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into disaster, if the government did not establish a strict rule. In conclusion,
human
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humans
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need
researcher
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researchers
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to identify all
kind
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kinds
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of
plans
and
animals
to ensure their safety. Meanwhile, these scientific works could trigger bad
people
to do illegal things. Unless the government take
this
seriously, our
research
environment on living
creatures
will always have dangerous potential.
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