The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant
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The diagram demonstrates the floor plan of a public library in the past and present.
Overall
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, there are several modifications that happened in 20 years,
this
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place received considerable innovations in the interior. The purposes of all four rooms were slightly changed, tables and chairs in the centre of the hall were removed
while
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certain other features
such
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as an information desk and Self-service machines were installed. The western part of the public library 20 years ago looked quite different than now,
this
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room
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provided CDs, videos, and computer games for the library’s clients. Nowadays, places become wider and divided into two zones, the first one is directed toward holding Storytelling events,
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the other belongs to Children’s fiction
books
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. The space between the two rooms was the Adult
books
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zone in the past,
however
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, now
this
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spot is transformed into A reference
books
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zone and looks more narrow than before.
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there is a slight makeover that happened with the
room
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in the lower left angle too, the reading
room
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with newspapers and magazines was replaced by a Computer
room
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.
Additionally
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, the door was reinstalled on the opposite wall of the
room
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. The western wing of the building has some innovations too, the area of Adult non-fiction
books
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become less than before,
while
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the Information desk and Self-service machines were placed on the rest of the space. The Enquiry desk was developed into a Café and the rounded shape of the
room
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was reconstructed into an angular with the door. The least recognizable changes were touched the next
room
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, which just was reconstructed from Children’s
books
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spot to the Lecture hall.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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