Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills Do you agree or disagree
Education
system is taking a new reformation in recent days; It is being argued Add an article
The education
by
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some
that starting from elementary to university, schools are concentrating on teaching theoretical Correct quantifier usage
apply
knowledge
instead
of practical skills
. In my opinion, either of these should be equally treated, because many of the corporates nowadays are looking for more personality skills
. Perhaps, it is equally important to learn about the process without which the core aspect of the field one cannot expertise in his career.
First of all, I believe that only with the help of practical skills
we would know how to survive the outside world. Indeed, nowadays there are many professions where they require at least a year
experience as an intern. Change noun form
year's
Furthermore
, it is a school’s duty to teach about
discipline and communication Change preposition
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skills
which contributes
a major part in developing individual personality. Change the verb form
contribute
For instance
, In India where I live, there was a subject called moral science where it teaches good and bad deeds and many of
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the
inspiring life lessons regarding discipline and punctuality, but during the recent reformation in Correct article usage
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2010
our government Add a comma
,2010
has
removed the subject from Unnecessary verb
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education
system.
Unequivocally, only learning practical Add an article
the education
skills
without any book knowledge
also
does not make us fit for any field. If an individual need
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needs
to
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an
expertise in a specific field it is important for them Remove the article
apply
acquire
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to acquire
knowledge
of the same such
as doctors, engineers, scientists
. Correct word choice
and scientists
Furthermore
, only if we learn it theoretically, we can implement it in practical
. Replace the word
practice
For Example
, A doctor cannot treat a patient without book knowledge
, so if he needs to get his license as a certified doctor, he needs to have both practical knowledge
and the
theoretical.
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apply
To conclude
, Schools should be reformed their teaching in either way. It is important that kids should learn within the books and the outside, only then
it would be easy for them to survive to achieve their dreams.Submitted by vyshu.bakkiam on
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