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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#universities #offer #courses #internet #people #study #development
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development
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 online courses these days. So universities are ready to make their courses online so that people can access them
any where
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.
This
 essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of
this
 system. Learning
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does not
doesn't
 only confine to
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the class
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class room
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classroom
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. So education systems are introducing a new mode of learning through online classes. Through
this
students
 can learn from any place or time . They can
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 the lesson n number of times and need not wait for
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 to solve
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 doubts.
This
 is more
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beneficial
 to
students
 whose house
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 away from colleges and
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 to travel daily for just a class. Fees
along with
 other expenses decrease.
Students
 will
also
 be able to gain
knowledge
 of other subjects .
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 Universities abroad are offering
students
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 complete
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semster
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semester
 online.
On the other hand
,
This
 will lead to less interaction among peers. Some
students
 may not follow the subjects and will lack in terms of both
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academic
academical
 and practical
knowledge
.
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 will
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 lead to
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 of communication skills and
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. They usually have more distractions.
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 civil engineers need field
knowledge
 than bookish
knowledge
. In conclusion ,There are both
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 and
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negatives
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. It totally depends on
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