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in some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult what is your opinion about this?

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in particular
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 the US
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aged individuals are not allowed to be outside on the street without an adult companion after a certain time at night.
Although
this
 restriction may not be beneficial in some circumstances I believe it would bring more advantages. Some people might believe that
this
 kind of strict restrictions
lead
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 to more disobedience especially dealing with
children
. frankly, many teenagers are inclined towards rebellion.
therefore
, a law which
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 them may cause more problems than just informing them of the dangers.
for example
, parents should warn their
children
 that at night there may be more criminals on the streets and they can abuse vulnerable individuals
such
 as
children
.
Although
 there may be
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 reasons
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why curfews might not be as functional as they seem, I reckon that it is better to
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 them than not. first of all, it will keep
defendless
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defenceless
defend less
children
 out of hazardous situations.
for instance
, surely there are criminals
in particular
 areas of
US
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which
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 usually commit crimes at midnight since
polices
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 are not as available as days.
Therefore
, any vulnerable individual especially kids will be at risk. Second of all, curfews and laws implemented for both
children
 and adults can lead to
more
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 disciplined society eventually.
while
 most laws will limit our personal choices,
majority
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 of them are for our own good and teach us to be more civilized as
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 whole society. including curfews for teenagers who are
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 more into rebellious activities which might get them into trouble. In conclusion,
such
 restrictions will bring more positive outcomes
such
 as moral lessons and keep us in a safer environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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