SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE ONLY REASON FOR LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE IS IN ORDER TO TRAVEL TO OR WORK IN A FOREIGN COUNTRY. oTHERS SAY THAT THESE ARE NOT THE ONLY RESON WHY SOMEONE SHOULD LEARN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE.

Nowadays the importance of learning a foreign
language
has become a topic of controversy in light of globalization and international interactions.
While
many argue that acquiring a new
language
is only necessary for individuals who go or work abroad, others believe that learning a foreign
language
offers a wide range of advantages beyond immigration. I personally believe that knowing a foreign
language
is essential, not only for expatriates
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but
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who remain in their home countries. In
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I am going to delve deeper
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both
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. Those are on the one hand who believe learning a foreign
language
primarily is associated with traveling or leaving one’s home country.
To begin
with, they argue that
people
should prioritize gaining a deep understanding of their mother
tounge
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tongue
before learning other
languages
. Since some ancient
languages
and dialects have become disappeared
due to
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, so make it
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crucial
critical
that
people
presserve
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preserve
these
languages
by actively using them in their daily lives. Widespread use of technology and translator applications,
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another reason for being reluctant to learn a new
language
. Proponents of
this
view argue that with
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of some translator
applications
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there is no need oneself acquire a new
language
, as they can easily translate any complicated text or document, written in any
language
in the world, into one’s mother tongue.
Consequently
learning foreign
languages
seems not necessary, as long as
people
stay in their home countries.
On the other hand
, there are
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numerous
advantages
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acquiring a new
language
. By learning a new
language
many opportunities are
subsequently
flooded into a
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life, both personally and professionally.
Firstly
from a personal perspective, learning a new
language
bring
this
opportunity to make meaningful communication with
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range of
people
around the world. It allows
people
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familiar with diverse ethnicities and cultures, ultimately one with more experience,
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healthier and more open-minded
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society.
Secondly
, from
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standpoint, individuals with multilingual skills meet
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of
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opportunities. Job seekers who
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foreign
language
proficiency could contribute
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raising
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revenue through international interactions and trades. Learning a new
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therefore
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our understanding of the world but
also
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chance of getting
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jobs, whether in our country or in overseas. To
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recapitulate
,
while
the question of who should learn
foreign
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language
and why remains controversial, I firmly believe that acquiring new
languages
have undeniable benefits in one’s life. It
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doors to personal growth, facilitate communication with
people
from different backgrounds and provide professional advantages.
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