There is a sports stadium near your home where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. This cause you and your neighbours some problems. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter- -explain who you are and where you live -describe the problem -suggest what the local council should do

Dear Mr. John, I am Ashun Patel, being a resident of Bruce Avenue for fifteen years. Hereby I would like to inform few concerns that have been raised over the past few weeks regarding noise till midnight and poor waste management at a sports stadium near my house after the weekend sports
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. As we have explicitly observed , there is no specific management to regulate the timings of the sports
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after-hours maintenance. The events initiate at 6PM and it
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till 11PM,
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we can hear a lot of crowds screaming and cheering noise where the sleep gets interrupted.
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to that, repeatedly we have noticed that after the completion of an
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, we usually face unsorted waste on the walkway which is connected to our street. It would be grateful if you take these suggestions into consideration, first of all, please adjust the timings of the
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like it should end by 9PM including cleaning. Within that, for
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trash management please include more dustbins with the covering lid at a specific distance and include an inspection team to verify
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. I hope you will consider my request and take possible steps to fulfil it. Yours faithfully, Ashun Patel

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Make sure to explain your problems more clearly and provide specific examples. This will make your message stronger and clearer.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to connect your ideas better and make your letter flow smoothly.
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Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.
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You clearly stated the issues you are facing related to the stadium.
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