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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart exhibits the banana prices in several developed countries,
such
 as
Japan
, France, Germany, and the
USA
 from 1996 to 2004.
Overall
, it had a fluctuating trend in
USD
 per
kilogram
 banana, where
bananas
 in
Japan
 was the most expensive prices in another country,
while
 in the
USA
 were the cheapest ones. In
Japan
, these explicitly remained stable for eight years, compared with the others which slightly grew around 0,25 and 0,5
USD
 per
kilogram
.
To begin
 with, the
price
 of
bananas
 in
Japan
 and the
USA
 reached the peak in 1998 at 3
USD
 per
kilogram
 and almost 1,35
USD
 per
kilogram
 respectively. Meanwhile, in Europe continents, like in France, it constantly grew until dropped to the lowest point in 1999 with a gap of 0,5
USD
 per
kilogram
.
In addition
, the
bananas
price
 in Germany declined to 1,25
USD
 per
kilogram
 in 1997 the next two years.
Furthermore
, after the 2000s, those
price
 in the
USA
 was steady at 1,2
USD
 per
kilogram
, whilst in
Japan
 it fell to the least
price
 in 2003 which accounted for half of its highest point five years ago.
Similarly
, the
price
 of
bananas
 in France diminished slowly by 1,75
USD
 per
kilogram
 in 2002 until it stabilized at 2
USD
 per
kilogram
 for the next year.
However
 in Germany, they went up to the greatest point at 2
USD
 per
kilogram
 in 2002,
then
 they plunged a quarter in the next period. All in all, the
bananas
 prices in
Japan
 were still the most expensive in 2004 at 2,5
USD
 per
kilogram
 than other developed countries.
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