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The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart exhibits the banana prices in several developed countries,
such
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 as
Japan
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, France, Germany, and the
USA
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 from 1996 to 2004.
Overall
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, it had a fluctuating trend in
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 banana, where
bananas
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 in
Japan
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 was the most expensive prices in another country,
while
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 in the
USA
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 were the cheapest ones. In
Japan
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, these explicitly remained stable for eight years, compared with the others which slightly grew around 0,25 and 0,5
USD
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 per
kilogram
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.
To begin
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 with, the
price
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 of
bananas
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 in
Japan
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 and the
USA
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 reached the peak in 1998 at 3
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 and almost 1,35
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 respectively. Meanwhile, in Europe continents, like in France, it constantly grew until dropped to the lowest point in 1999 with a gap of 0,5
USD
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 per
kilogram
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.
In addition
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, the
bananas
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price
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 in Germany declined to 1,25
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 in 1997 the next two years.
Furthermore
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, after the 2000s, those
price
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 in the
USA
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 was steady at 1,2
USD
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 per
kilogram
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, whilst in
Japan
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 it fell to the least
price
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 in 2003 which accounted for half of its highest point five years ago.
Similarly
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, the
price
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 of
bananas
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 in France diminished slowly by 1,75
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 in 2002 until it stabilized at 2
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 for the next year.
However
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 in Germany, they went up to the greatest point at 2
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 in 2002,
then
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 they plunged a quarter in the next period. All in all, the
bananas
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 prices in
Japan
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 were still the most expensive in 2004 at 2,5
USD
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 per
kilogram
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 than other developed countries.

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