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Nowadays, many buildings have open and common rooms instead of separate and enclosed ones. What can be the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays, many buildings have open and common rooms
instead
 of separate and enclosed ones.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 trend.
Firstly
, the advantages of
this
 open
space
 trend like
this
 will make the workplace or the house bigger with more
space
, help
people
 feel relaxed
with
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 an open
space
, and that can help a lot for children because kids living in an open
space
 so can expose many things.
Secondly
, in a big
space
 at
work
, the worker can easier communicate with each other or
people
 can see
people
 with their problems and help
people
 with their
work
 and
work
 it out together, and in a family,
people
 can live together in a big family. On another hand, the disadvantage of these open rooms it
people
 will not feel comfortable with their personal
space
 because
they
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room
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rooms
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 aren't separate so the personal
space
 there will
no
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not
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 more for
people
 who are living or working. Because they
work
 in a big
space
 so the noise will go aground the holding area and
people
 can't focus at
work
 are
a
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family
member
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members
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 can not rest because there is always noise in the house. In conclusion, open and common rooms
instead
 of separate and enclosed ones can have many advantages and disadvantages of
this
 trend.
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