Nowadays, online shopping is rapidly replacing physical shopping in stores. Do the befefits outweigh the drawbacks, in your view?

The popularity of

internet

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shopping

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increased dramatically in recent years and it overtook the position of in-store shopping.

Although

purchasing one's need online has been a time-saver and flexible resource,

this

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to create negative impacts on product judgement and employment. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and outline the reason why I

belive

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believe

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the

befefits

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benefits

of

internet

shopping outweigh the

drawbacks

. Indeed, every

advantages

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comes with disadvantages. One of the major

drawbacks

of online shopping is causing a huge number of unemployment, especially in retail shops. Since many people started shopping online more

regulary

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regularly

, work hours and wages of retail shop assistants were reduced.

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, some of them were dismissed and most of them

were struggled

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with income as individuals were able to purchase a range of products online

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during

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the Covid-19

situations

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. The other negative impact of shopping on websites is definitely, being unable to try on the goods that

customer

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wants.

Impossiblity

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Impossibility

of checking out the products before buying

it

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them

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causes to increase

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rate of

wrong-parchase

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wrong-purchase

,

such

as size or colour.

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, it not only takes some time to get

exchange

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to

right

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size or colour but

also

get

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refund

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a refund

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as the employees of online shops are usually dealing with

the

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amount number of consumers. Certainly, those are the

drawbacks

of online

parchasing

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purchasing

. By

contract

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, there are significant benefits on the other side. The most attractive advantage is that

internet

shopping can be a time-saver. If people are busy with

thier

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their

work or social lives, they could make orders anytime

at

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anywhere in the world. Avoiding a

timespent

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time spent

time-spent

in shops physically

also

provides an

opportuniny

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opportunity

to have

an

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extra time for yourself.

In these

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days, as many people

works

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much longer hours than in the past, they might be able to use

thier

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their

extra time for maintaining their health

from

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doing

sport

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activities,

such

as doing yoga or joining a gym. In fact, some

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that being able to shop anything online contributes to

help

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them to have a life-work balance.

The another

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benefical

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beneficial

point of

internet

shopping is

varieties

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variety

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. Customers can not only choose the items that they need from a range of varieties but

also

compare the prices between the websites. If you found a good on sale and saved some money, you could have a chance to purchase

an

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another product.

Clearly

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,Clearly

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those are the great deals. In conclusion,

although

I discussed the befits and the

drawbacks

of online shopping, it is obvious that online shopping is growing continuously as it is convenient for anyone. In my opinion, I believe the view,

which

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that

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nowadays

internet

shopping is essential in most societies.