Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant examples or experience you have to support your answer.

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It has been a debate
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budget
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allotment should be equal between
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and
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.
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idea, I do believe that the
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should allocate to
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which more
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use in
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part of the schools.
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considering the major aim of an academic complex which is educational purposes,
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facilities come in second place.
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the benefits of a healthy lifestyle and the importance of staying in shape are as bright as the day for everyone,
sports
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facilities are in demand for higher money allotments to equip compared to
libraries
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. It requires professional trainers, dietary consultants and providing safe supplies, Which altogether, leads to a considerable amount of
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.
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, with the money allocated for a bench press merely, about five books could be bought for
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to use.
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,
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serve in the same way an academic complex needs and it is strengthening
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' level of knowledge, leading to a better ranking among other universities.
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, most
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use the facility, so spending more
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on
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section ,is more reasonable since there are more users.
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, with
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budget
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lots of academic books and articles can be purchased which may help
students
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with lower income.
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, the subject of money allotment in academic fields causes some debates and I agree that the university
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for
libraries
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and their facilities is well-spent, since the major aim of universities is studies, not
sports
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.
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,
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way, the complex could support international
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with lower income to be on the same level as native ones academically.
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