Some people think that private health care is better for people. Others say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of private health service. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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main issue in whole notions,

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is very challenging for entire countries. Many individuals think that private hospitals are very well for the masses and others think that authorities gives should pay

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for

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for

citizen

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many pros and cons of hospitality in private

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facilities

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essay will discuss both views in

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paragraph. There are many problems related to

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care services, Let's begin with, If I say about private hospitals service So, that are so advance in the public

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care.

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, private healthcare

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high-quality machines and unique technology for treatments without any waiting. They bought very costly machines and body equipment from foreign countries and cities because

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so easy for them.

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, They

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very costly medicine but It is affecting

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recovery very soon.

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as Kidney transplantation,

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, They get treatment within three months and Private

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organisations provide 24-hour service or fast.

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, all private healthcare

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so clean,

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and the food quality is too good. The employees take care of

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as guests or

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feel their

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comfortable atmosphere. On the second hand, There are many disadvantages to private hospitals Kind

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private

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organisations are providing

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so expensive for normal people

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the reason every mankind did not take benefits.

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in

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multiple sessions

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the charges. It is

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impact on

patients

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thing is not justified because every individual is not capable for that they take costly treatment.

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, a Patient survives to critical

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issue and they have a long time so they approach

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private

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hospital rather than

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hospital because

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takes an estimated 6

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for treatments but the patient did not wait for them.

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should give fast

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and

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advanced technology used for critical

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issues

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as heart transplantation, and all types of cancer problems. In conclusion, private

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to cares provide very good services for

peoples

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people

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and

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medicines too well but treatment is very costly.