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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, some
people
 think that they can manage their health problems by new
methods
instead
 of visiting their usual doctor. I certainly believe that these recent
methods
 of
cure
 have a lot of positive think. In
this
 essay, I will explain my view and give some examples.
Firstly
, regarding recent technology
such
 as cyber links, societies prefer to research new information from that platforms because not only do they find special native
medicines
such
 as herbal tea but
also
 they can buy from online sites with prescriptions.
Therefore
 they can
use
 them easily. In
this
 way, some
people
 try to find new
methods
 of
cure
such
 as ancient Chinese cures like an injection of special liquid in the person's body.
Furthermore
, these days the young generation tries to
use
 one of the famous teas which have lots of minerals and protein. So, these types of
cure
methods
 have more benefits than chemical medicine which made my industries.
On the other hand
,
people
 have to know that doctors spent years at university to learn the recent
cure
 ways. So, they became professional persons about cures by chemical
medicines
.
Therefore
, we have to be more sensitive about our health problems because not only do some
people
use
medicines
 without any investment but they
also
 do not
use
 doctor's prescriptions.
For example
, if we can not manage the amount of herbal tea neither it has a positive effect on our body nor can be a reason for lots of illnesses. In conclusion, native
medicines
 have so benefits. Because, you can find information about them and buy them easily from online platforms but we have to be aware because, if we
use
 them more than the normal amount, they can be a reason for our illnesses.
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