You are in the local rugby team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in the hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter, say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

Dear John, It is unfortunate to hear about your recent health issue, and I found that you are admitted
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the Max hospital a day before yesterday. First of all, I was completely stunned after hearing that from one of our
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during our chat
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yesterday evening. He told me that you
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suffered from a sudden and sharp pain in your lower stomach area
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the
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Sunday. And it is diagnosed as a stone in your left kidney
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that needs to be operated
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quickly as possible. By researching the hospital details, I found
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Mr. Robert who is going to perform your surgery is one of the best surgeons available in your city.
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, by spending years with you, I know your assertive attitude, and I am quite confident that you will recover as fast as you ran during our
last
match to win a goal for our team.
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your city and we can meet soon. Get well soon buddy! Regards, David Smith
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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