You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter explain why you took the job describe the problems that you experienced suggest what could be done about them

Dear sir, I am writing
this
to express my interest in securing a part-time job through your agency. My name is Pramod, and I am a university student where I am studying Project Management course. I have a flexible schedule because my course is online. As a management student, I am looking to get a customer-facing job.
This
will not only teach me How to deal with people but
also
equipped
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me with customer service experience.
Therefore
, I would be happy to work as a Cashier, Customer service representative or Sales person. I worked as a part-time salesman at a Sales company for 6 months, where I was selling kitchen appliances door to door.
Also
, I did some office work as I was managing the firm inventory records. In terms of skills, I have phenomenal communication, sales
as well as
marketing skills. Hoping that you find a suitable job for me. Yours sincerely, Pramod
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Task Achievement
Ensure clarity in explaining the reason for taking the part-time job initially, rather than expressing interest in a new job.
Coherence and Cohesion
Balance the structure by aligning your paragraphs to focus on one main idea at a time.
Writing Tone
Polite and professional tone maintained throughout the letter.
Greeting and Closing
The final closing is appropriately formal and consistent with the rest of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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