The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009

The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009
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The provided pie charts compare 6 categories of transportation in which people travel to one university in separate years:2004 and 2009.Units are measured in percentage It is noticeable that the proportion of using cars experienced a considerable fall over the 5-year period
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figure for cars and bicycles witnessed an upward trend from 2004 to 2009. We can see that the most preferred transportation which people commute to one university was the bus which climbed from 33% to 46% in 2004 and 2009. 9% of the pie chart belonged to bicycles which was the third highest proportion.
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figure saw a sharp increase at 16% in 2009.The percentage of train and walking experienced a small rise over the whole period. With regard to negative feedback,the percentage of cars which was the first highest proportion of transport dipped sharply from 51% in 2004 to 28% in 2009.
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