The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009

The given two pie charts compare people who are travelling to a university by car, bicycle, bus, train and walking from 2004 to 2009.

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the proportion of buses and bicycles experienced a considerable increase,

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figure for cars saw a fall.

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, train and walking figures a bit change, namely rise over the given period. In 2004, 51% of

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forms rate went on cars which has the largest pie of the chart,

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by 2009,

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figure had fallen by 28%.The smallest proportion of

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modda belonged to train in the first year and there was a rise from 3%to 4%.In

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sense of

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the walking category rise by 4% and 6%.

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, during a half ,decade the demand for bus

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methods experienced a per cent increase from33%to 46%.

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, in terms of bicycles, the proportion of

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category made up 9%in 2004, after 5 years

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figure saw a sharp increase to 16%.