The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The maps figure above illustrate the changes that occurred in the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that
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there was a major enhancement on the road to
this
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hospital
According to
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the given graphs, it can be clearly spotted that the hospital entrance has expanded to include a public car park, a totally new bus station and two new roundabouts. The public car stop has been placed in the eastern part beside the hospital.
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,
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vehicle park has remained in the same position since 2007.
In addition
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, two roundabouts had been established in between the hospital street.
However
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, the bus station had been removed to a new section, opposite the worker car park. Those new roundabouts have direct access to the bus station.
To sum up
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, we can see that a great revolution and development happened in 2010. The capacity of the services had increased dramatically.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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