You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In you letter - introduce yourself - say why you are interested in this sports club - ask some questions about the club eg. facilities, members, costs.
Dear manager,
I have started
an
Oxford College but Correct your spelling
at
this
college has no sports
facilities of its own. I did not know you did not have a sports
club
.
Actually, I was very excited to start Oxford University. I have been exercising regularly for a long time. I was searching for a sports
club
nearby.
I find your sports
club
. If you accept members from outside, I would like to come to become a member.
My old gym was huge so it did not bother me if it was crowded. Is your sports
club
big too?
Cleanliness is very important to me. Is it adequately cleaned?
I am very obsessed with this
. I read very nice things about you on your social media accounts.
I wanted to write to you because I liked the comments.
I hope you get back to me as soon as possible because not exercising for a long time makes me sad.
Kind regards,Submitted by kubrairmak287 on
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task achievement
Ensure to provide specific details about the information you seek about the club, such as membership costs and specific facilities available.
coherence cohesion
Try to organize your letter with clear, focused paragraphs that cover each aspect of the prompt separately.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, creating a positive tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
You have addressed the main points of the task by introducing yourself, mentioning your interest in the club, and asking pertinent questions.
task achievement
The writing tone is friendly and approachable, suitable for a letter to a sports club manager.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.