One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

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Dear Sir, We are both living in the same building. And my apartment number is three on the ground floor. Actually, I am writing
this
letter regarding the incident
happened
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that happened
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in our
car
parking yesterday. Around 6 p.m in the evening your
son
and his friends were playing
the
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apply
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football in
car
parking. And I was sitting in the front garden. Unexpectedly, Your
son
kicked my
car
and broke the windshield of my
car
. After I saw
this
and I
immidiately
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immediately
reached
.
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Instead
, of
apology
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apologising
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your
son
started
argue
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with me. I want you to know about his behaviour.
Secondly
, I got
video
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a video
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recording from our
onwer
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owner
and I will send the video recording and mechanic slip.
Which
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I want you to pay
it
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for it
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.
Certanily
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Certainly
, you ought to keep an eye on your
son
's behaviour. I hope you will pay the bill and contact with
be
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me
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as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Tania
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