The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram illustrates the process
that is
used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Overall
, the digger digs the clay for putting it into the metal grid and the roller. The bricks are cut into pieces evenly and then
the brick will be shaped by the mound.
First,
the brick will be placed in the drying oven for 1 to 2 days and then
it will be placed in the kiln moderately for 200 until 980 Celsius. Then
, the brick is placed in the high kiln for 870 or 1300 Celsius, and then
it will be placed in the cooling chamber for 3 or 4 days. Lastly
, the finished bricks are packed for dispatching to the delivery.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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