You have bought furniture from a store. When you received, there were some damages. Write a letter to the concerned store manager. In your letter, you should: •Give information about the furniture. • Explain the damage • Ask the manager to solve your issue.

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter to express disappointment with

a recent furniture

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recent furniture

a piece of recent furniture

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that I bought in your store

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Moday

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Monday

, order number #12345. I ordered a set of chairs that were displayed in your store as 4 chairs for

dinning

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dining

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room, before choosing it I

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checked 2 chairs

ramdomly

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randomly

and asked your staff to pack.

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, on their arrival I found that

was

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one chair

has

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had

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a lot of scratches and dents on the back of

chair

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the chair

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, there was a big hole on the cushion that suggest that it had been used before and returned to your store again. I have read the refund policy on your website, and as I am dissatisfied with the product, I would like to request you to change a new chair for me or fix it carefully to be like new. I trust

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matter will be resolved soon. Yours faithfully, Joseph Hien

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

Some feel that tourism endangers culture while others feel it is beneficial. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.