In many countries, women and men both work full-time. It is logical for men and women to share household chores equally (eg. cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days in many countries, both

women

and men work

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full-time

job

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and it is a basic thing that they should divide

household

chores

equally. From my point of view, I totally agree with

this

statement for many seasons. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my agreement will be outlined in detail.

To begin

with, most elders believe that

household

chores

are a responsibility of

women

because in the past, all men needed to go out for working and there were not much

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offered to

women

, leading to

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had

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to

stayed

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home and cleaned the house.

As a result

,

this

ancient mindset

have

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effected

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to

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many people nowadays.

On the contrary

, family

chores

such

as cleaning houses, washing dishes and cooking should be shared

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every people in

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house, especially if all of them work full-time.

In addition

,

household

chores

are not only cleaning the house

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but

also

looking after children. To illustrate, both father and mother should spend time with their children equally since it causes a good relationship between family.

Consequently

, when those kids grow up, they will not feel that they lack

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family bonds. Another

advantages

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of sharing

household

chores

is that the family could have activities together

instead

of watching television or playing games,

also

it leads to a strong family bond .

Furthermore

, the

chores

would finish faster if they help each

others

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. To summarize, I personally agree with

this

viewpoint that the

household

chores

should be shared equally for both men and

women

including children.