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Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue?

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In many nations, littering misuse in public places is considered an issue.
This
 essay will explain the reasons and give some measures to deal with
this
 problem. The obvious reason for these actions is that there is
fewer
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 common
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wastebasket on the street. In several developing nations, there
are
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 just a few or even no garbage on the road and
public
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in public
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 areas. pedestrians claim that they are difficult to find
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garbage, when they desire to throw
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trash.
For example
 in Vietnam, there are a lot of street has no garbages
such
 as Nguyen Chi Thanh or Tay Son. It could lead to the activities of disposing of
waste
 on
streets
.
In addition
, local citizens
are not realise
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 they could contribute to environmental problems. Because schools and their parents do not
raising
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raise
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children
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children's
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 awareness of environmental protections, the children may think that the
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 of
throw
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throwing
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waste
 on
streets
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the streets
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 is normal.
Consequently
, there is an increasing number of children disposing of
waste
 on
streets
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the streets
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. There are several feasible measures.
Firstly
, the government should put more emphasis on raising people's awareness. By organizing
enviromental
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environmental
 awareness campaigns, the Authorities could encourage local inhabitants to avoid littering misuse in public areas.
For instance
, In ,Vietnam the States has established many programs that instil community with environmental protection.
As a result
, there is
less
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 common community who throw trash on the
streets
.
Moreover
, in order to reduce disposing of
waste
 on
streets
, the government should impose regulations that give
population
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the population
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 punishments when they are
littering
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litter
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waste
 in public places.
For example
, in the old quarter of Vietnam, if people are disposing of
waste
 on
streets
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the streets
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, the authorities fine them for
amount
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the amount
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 of money.
Consequently
, there is a significant decrease number of people littering
waste
 than it did. In conclusion, there are several reasons that could lead to the action of throwing
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waste
 on the
streets
.
However
, the states can take several ways to reduce
this
 problem, by organizing environmental alertness campaigns and imposing restrictions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate provision
  • waste bins
  • public areas
  • accumulation
  • public awareness
  • environmental and health implications
  • strict regulations
  • penalties
  • littering
  • infrastructure
  • regular waste collection
  • public education campaigns
  • responsible waste management
  • implementing stricter penalties
  • community service
  • adherence
  • compliance
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