The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates three places where the new leisure centre can be constructed.
Overall
, the map has a forest on the left side, a residential
area
in the middle and a factory on the right. The first suggested
place
for a new centre is near an industrial
area
.
This
place
is located near the river, which gives it an advantage.
However
, the discussed neighbourhood is probably contaminated by harmful emissions. Another
place
the new leisure object can be built
is
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the residential
area
, down by the stream of the river. It
also
contains access to water,
as well as
a road, but has nothing other than that. The
last
suggested location is on the left side of the map, from the right of the forest.
This
area
is far away from any source of pollution, but it is
also
not close to civilized areas.
While
this
place
is probably the cleanest and the best suitable option for outdoor activities, it is worth mentioning that there is a lack of infrastructure.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • space constraints
  • costs
  • prime location
  • secluded
  • natural area
  • serene environment
  • remoteness
  • accessibility
  • transport facilities
  • advantageous
  • undisturbed leisure
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