In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Some tribes inform their offspring on how they will be able to succeed in everything they desire when they work diligently towards accomplishing it.
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message teaches the child not to be lazy in all their endeavours and Linking Words
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encourages the child to achieve excellence by not giving up easily. Linking Words
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, a successful entrepreneur like Aliko Dangote applied Linking Words
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principle of hard work and he did not give up on his business because well known. Linking Words
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, it instils a trait of persistence and resilience in them by letting them know that everything doesn't come on a platter of gold .
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could make them indulge in bad attitudes in order to achieve their goals at all costs. Linking Words
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and they act on it excessively it can affect their mental health because they might not pay attention to anything else than what they want to achieve and will not be able to connect to the social world around them and f these Use synonyms
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don't achieve their aim it can affect their mental health negatively. Use synonyms
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, the rate of mental illness has increased among students and when they were interviewed most of them attributed it to stress and the fear of failure and rebuke by patients allowing them to take caffeine and drug in other to stay awake.
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be taught that not everything goes as want it to even after work and at Linking Words
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point they should learn to let go and cut their selves some slack.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...