Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
In today's era of the modern world,technological advancements are at their peak and have gifted us many things and one
such
example is the computer.Few individuals hold a view that Linking Words
computers
have made life simpler and more convenient Use synonyms
while
others opine that they have made life more complex and stressful.
On the one hand,there are numerous reasons why some personages think that Linking Words
computers
are gifts to us by making our lives easier and more comfortable.Use synonyms
Firstly
,the automation of repetitive tasks using computer technology has saved a lot of time and human effort in various sectors.Linking Words
Secondly
,we can access a good amount of information on any topic with just a click making it easier for us to accumulate knowledge and Linking Words
hence
, promoting personal Linking Words
as well as
professional growth.Take an example of me,at work if I face some issues in code and am not able to resolve them ,I would google the problem and Linking Words
then
get many solutions which I would implement and Linking Words
subsequently
,the code would work.Linking Words
Finally
, Linking Words
computers
have boomed the communication sector by enabling people to do virtual meetings from any part of the world .
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On the other hand
,virtual communication has replaced face-to-face interactions between people which could have negative effects on interpersonal skills Linking Words
further
giving way to psychosocial issues like depression and anxiety.Data privacy and cyber threats act as another reason for stress among people .They are constantly in fear that the data shared online could be attacked by cyber scammers.
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To sum up
,in my view,Linking Words
computers
have both pros and cons and despite the negative points,Use synonyms
computers
have made human lives simpler and more comfortable .Use synonyms
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