The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The pie graph depicts the proportion of households who lived in owned and rented accommodations in the United Kingdom from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the maximum percentage of households in rented Linking Words
accommodation
in the first year, but after that it followed Use synonyms
downward
trend.
In the year 1918, almost 78% of individuals lived in rented Add an article
a downward
accommodation
, Use synonyms
whereas
approximately 26% of British Linking Words
was stayed
in owned Change to the active voice
stayed
has stayed
accommodation
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, just above 30% of people Linking Words
of
England used to stay in owned houses, Change preposition
in
while
it was Linking Words
alomost
twofold in Correct your spelling
almost
case
of rented Correct article usage
the case
accommodation
in 1939. The percentage of People who live in rented and owned Use synonyms
accommodation
was Use synonyms
near
about a century Change the word
nearly
was
collectively in 1961. Surprisingly, in 1971, when both types of residential Unnecessary verb
apply
accommodation
popularity were similar.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, the households owning and renting Linking Words
accommodation
was 60% and 40% in 1981, respectively. After a decade, owned Use synonyms
accommodation
increased by nearly 8%, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
rented decreased by almost Add the comma(s)
,however
same
. Correct article usage
the same
Lastly
, in 2011, the popularity of owned Linking Words
accommodation
was near about 64% and 36% of rented Use synonyms
accommodation
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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