The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The survey gives information about the dawn
town
of a Small city currently and the future called
Islip
Town
.
Overall
, the two significant changes of the
Islip
twan are adding a new shopping centre and establishing a Dual carriageway. Looking first at the
Islip
city centre now, there is a main road which is located between 2 rows of
shops
at the North of the map.
Moreover
,
Park
is situated on the
right
side
of the picture and
also
the school is sited on the left
side
of the map under the
shops
and Housing.
Furthermore
, 2 Housing areas are located in the middle of the plan
while
there are under the
shops
to the south. The countryside is situated at the top of the outline of the
town
. Going forward to the future plan for the map of
Islip
town
, there are So many changes. The main Road is going to be changed and the pedestrians only will be replaced. At the top of pedestrians only, the Bus station is going to be added on the left
side
and going forward to the
right
side
, the shopping centre will be established and
then
the car
park
is going to be created on the
right
side
of the graph. The new housing is going to be built and
also
another one is going to be made under the
shops
and left
side
of the
park
.
In addition
, the
park
will be resized and it will be located in the place as same as
right
now.
Furthermore
, one of the housing will be relocated to the east
side
and inside the Duel carriageway and the other will be outside the way to the
right
side
,
also
school is going to be relocated and it is going to be outside the road. In the end, the accommodations will be surrounded by a dual carriageway, except for the school and one of the housing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, islip, shops, park, right, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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