The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.

The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The map illustrates the change in the coastal parks between the past and today where the place transforms an agricultural space into a tourist destination. In general, it appears that the park become much more modern, with more trees and significantly more facilities available. One interesting change is that unused land has been constructed to build a lake,
although
Linking Words
the animal place is removed. The fam buildings in the middle of the park were
also
Linking Words
destroyed and replaced by the car park. In the same way, the agricultural land in the east of the place has been replaced with woods and a cafe has been added on the corner of the road. If we see at the beach field, it can be said that people who go to the beach for holiday are more crowded than before. Other than that, some infrastructure has been built to support the visitors
such
Linking Words
as the steps and footpath space. It can be concluded that
this
Linking Words
field is more interesting to visit after development because it supports some activities.
Submitted by dewintaputri23 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: