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the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
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The line graph illustrates
about
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apply
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the proportion increase
of
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in
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 the
population
 living in four different countries between 1970 to 2020, and it is
estimation
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estimated
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 for 2030 and 2040. It can be concluded that the most of country
have
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 rose,
expect
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except
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 the
population
 of
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 have
slight
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a slight
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 reduction. The
population
 living in Malaysia have the highest,
it
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and it
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 will become a popular residential city. To be detailed, there had been the largest number of people living in Malaysia and Philippines reaching 30% and 31% in 1970. It is predicted to leap until 2040 in Malaysia, which has 40% to 80%,
it
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and it
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 will flourish as a desirable residential area.
In contrast
, the
population
 living in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 had dramatically descended from the approximately 49% to 42% between 1990 to 2010.
However
, the tendency has
ascending
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ascended
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 again, from about 49% to 54%. What
also
 caught our attention was the number of people living in Thailand and Indonesia
had
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below 20%
1970
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in 1970
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, but significantly increased to 25% in 2000. After 2000, Indonesia's living
population
 until 2040 is almost three times as large (58%). The number of citizens
residence
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residing
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 in Thailand almost stayed stable, not over 30% and not under 25% between 2000 to 2020.
In addition
, it
predicted
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is predicted
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 to boom from 2030 to 2040, it will over 40%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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