Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
It seems to be that many
people
try different ways to look like they are young. In this
essay
I will discuss the causes behind Add a comma
,essay
this
and explain why I believe it is a positive trend.
There are two main reasons why more members of the public are cautious about their age
. Firstly
, by appearing young, individuals increase their chances of landing a date or a date with a younger person. This
is because people
seem to be attracted to people
who are around their age
. For instance
, when I meet people
in a bar and they end up asking my age
, they find it shocking that I am 38. As a result
, they find it interesting and some find it attractive. Moreover
, there are some who like to stay healthy and young, hence
they do yoga, eat healthy
and work out at the gym. These habits help them not just look under their Change the adjective
healthily
age
but also
to live longer.
I believe this
is a positive phenomenon. The most significant benefit is that it creates a better life style
for everyone, which aids them in balancing their work and life. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
This
can be particularly useful to models, actors and sports stars, as their career is extended. For example
, the NBA player, Lebron James is still playing at the age
of 38 in such
a highly competitive sport with much younger players. On the other hand
(never use on the other hand
by itself in IELTS. It is part of a pair and not using both is considered an informal approach) some actors do yoga to look fresh and young to land a leading role for new movies to enhance their career. Therefore
, it is necessary for them to look younger in the movie.
In conclusion, even the average person wants to stay healthy and younger for their own reasons because for them it makes them happy. (Weak conclusion as you have not given a summary of all the main points presented)Submitted by den_wei20 on
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