Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

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It seems to be that many

people

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try different ways to look like they are young. In

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I will discuss the causes behind

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and explain why I believe it is a positive trend. There are two main reasons why more members of the public are cautious about their

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, by appearing young, individuals increase their chances of landing a date or a date with a younger person.

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is because

people

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seem to be attracted to

people

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who are around their

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, when I meet

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in a bar and they end up asking my

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, they find it shocking that I am 38.

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, they find it interesting and some find it attractive.

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, there are some who like to stay healthy and young,

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they do yoga, eat

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and work out at the gym. These habits help them not just look under their

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but

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to live longer. I believe

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is a positive phenomenon. The most significant benefit is that it creates a better

life style

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for everyone, which aids them in balancing their work and life.

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can be particularly useful to models, actors and sports stars, as their career is extended.

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, the NBA player, Lebron James is still playing at the

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of 38 in

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a highly competitive sport with much younger players.

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by itself in IELTS. It is part of a pair and not using both is considered an informal approach) some actors do yoga to look fresh and young to land a leading role for new movies to enhance their career.

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, it is necessary for them to look younger in the movie. In conclusion, even the average person wants to stay healthy and younger for their own reasons because for them it makes them happy. (Weak conclusion as you have not given a summary of all the main points presented)

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

331 words

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