You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

#area #neighbours #situation #addresses #neighbour

Dear Neighbour, Our parking arrangement was working well for me since we had it for 2 years now, but recently it is not because when I leave to work at 7 am, I often find tools scattered on the ground behind my car.

This

takes about 5 minutes from my time to remove the gear which makes me arrive late to work. I am not sure who is not removing his tools from the garage, kindly remove them and do not leave them there overnight. I can offer you to use my tools drawer, the black one, I have a couple of empty drawers. you can use those to store your equipment if you are having trouble finding a place to keep them. I am inviting you to have a meeting at my house

this

weekend the 17th of June. So we can all discuss solutions to solve

this

issue, as I am sure I am not the only one who is suffering from

this

inconvenience daily. I am looking forward to seeing you at my home. Yours sincerely, John Walker.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

181 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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