The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data in the two given tables provides a lot of information about the degree of
temperature
and the Use synonyms
time
of Use synonyms
sunrise
and sunset in December 2018 in Use synonyms
London
and Use synonyms
Sydney
.
Generally, Use synonyms
it is clear that
the Linking Words
temperature
in Use synonyms
Sydney
was higher than in Use synonyms
London
; the Use synonyms
sunrise
Use synonyms
time
in Use synonyms
Sydney
was earlier than in Use synonyms
London
; and so was the sunset Use synonyms
time
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
Sydney
's maximum and minimum Use synonyms
temperature
levels on Saturday, Use synonyms
29th
, were 28 and 18 degrees, Correct article usage
the 29th
while
on the same day, Linking Words
London
had only 13 degrees Use synonyms
in
the maximum and 3 degrees Change preposition
apply
in
the minimum. Change preposition
apply
Sydney
's Use synonyms
temperature
was higher than Use synonyms
London
's.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, there is Linking Words
sunrise
Use synonyms
time
. It appears that Use synonyms
Sydney
's Use synonyms
sunrise
hours on Friday 28th and Saturday 29th were Use synonyms
quarter
to six AM, Correct article usage
a quarter
while
Linking Words
London
's were about five past eight AM. Use synonyms
Sydney
's Use synonyms
time
of Use synonyms
sunrise
was earlier than Use synonyms
London
's.
Use synonyms
Thirdly
, the sunset period in Linking Words
London
was faster than in Use synonyms
Sydney
. It was about three to fourteen p.m. in Use synonyms
London
, Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
Sydney
it was six past eight p.m.Use synonyms
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