The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data in the two given tables provides a lot of information about the degree of
temperature
and the time
of sunrise
and sunset in December 2018 in London
and Sydney
.
Generally, it is clear that
the temperature
in Sydney
was higher than in London
; the sunrise
time
in Sydney
was earlier than in London
; and so was the sunset time
.
To begin
with, Sydney
's maximum and minimum temperature
levels on Saturday, 29th
, were 28 and 18 degrees, Correct article usage
the 29th
while
on the same day, London
had only 13 degrees in
the maximum and 3 degrees Change preposition
apply
in
the minimum. Change preposition
apply
Sydney
's temperature
was higher than London
's.
Secondly
, there is sunrise
time
. It appears that Sydney
's sunrise
hours on Friday 28th and Saturday 29th were quarter
to six AM, Correct article usage
a quarter
while
London
's were about five past eight AM. Sydney
's time
of sunrise
was earlier than London
's.
Thirdly
, the sunset period in London
was faster than in Sydney
. It was about three to fourteen p.m. in London
, while
in Sydney
it was six past eight p.m.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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