The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.

The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph depicts the total amount of
people
disturbed by various types of
noise
pollution
during the daytime and nighttime in the year 2007. We can observe that more
people
in the cities were affected by
noise
pollution
than those residing in the countryside in 2007. The main source of
noise
pollution
was Traffic. Specifically, the
noise
from traffic in the towns impacted 64
million
and 48
million
people
day and night.
On the other hand
, in the village, 34
million
and 24
million
people
were affected, which was half of that in the cities. During the day, the
noise
from the trains affected 10
million
suburban residents and 8
million
people
in the countryside, which was moderately higher than the number of affected
people
at night in both areas, with 8
million
and 6
million
respectively. The remaining
noise
pollution
sources, aircraft and industries, affected the urban and rural residents less significantly. In the daytime,
noise
from aircraft affected 4
million
urban
people
, twice the figure for rural residents. At night, the value was the same in the cities
as well as
in the rural areas. Meanwhile, no one was affected by the industrial
noise
in the countryside.
However
, 1
million
and 0.25
million
citizens in the urban area were impacted by the industrial
noise
during the daytime and nighttime.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • number of people
  • affected by
  • types of noise pollution
  • cities
  • rural areas
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • daytime
  • nighttime
  • summarize
  • main findings
  • conclusion
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