Many people think that if plenty of death system introduce in country the crimate rate get decrease. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, with the development of society, how to deal with
crime
has become a point of argument.Some people argue
death
penalty
can prevent
crime
happen.I completely agree with
this
point of view. On the one hand, severe punishment is the best way to prevent
crime
.Criminals think carefully about whether they can afford the consequences before committing a
crime
.
For instance
, the rate of
crime
in countries that have the
death
penalty
is lower than in not.
Moreover
, the
death
penalty
can reduce living expenses for supporting offenders.
This
money can use in other ways
such
as scholarships for students who
need
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.
On the other hand
,the
death
penalty
has more severe consequences for victims.In most instances,if criminals know they will face the
death
penalty
they will kill the sufferer.
This
,
on the contrary
, undermines the original intention of the punishment, which was to protect the people, but
as a result
, the people were persecuted more seriously
To sum up
,
although
the
death
penalty
has some side effects it should be introduced in our countries.Its advantage is outweighed by
the
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disadvantage.
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