The Two Maps Below Show Road Access To A City Hospital In 2007 And 2010

The Two Maps Below Show Road Access To A City Hospital In 2007 And 2010
The graph below illustrated how facilities around the city hospital changed over 3 years.
Overall
, there were a lot of improvements in 2010, which helped people to feel more comfortable when they visit the hospital. First of all, the location of the hospital was not changed and it was still surrounded by Ring
Road
.
However
, there was a new roundabout on the crossing point of Hospital
Road
and Ring
Road
in 2010, which did not exist in 2007.
Also
, all bus stations along Hospital
Road
were removed and constructed a new big space for buses in the west part of the
road
. The increasing number of cars demanded the parking place to be developed. Hospital staff can park their cars in the previous place. But, visitors should go to the east part of the Hospital where they find new public parking. The
last
change can be noticed if you look at the crossing point of Hospital
Road
and City
Road
, where the second roundabout was constructed for the mobility of vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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