Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some
people
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believe that when we live in a
country
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where we have to speak a foreign
language
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can
cause
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serious social problems,
as well as
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practical problems. I agree with
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statement because many
people
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prefer to make a close
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friend
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friends
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in the same nation person, and some
sign
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languages
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are understandable only by the native
people
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. Living in a foreign
country
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may
cause
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a serious social
problem
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when someone tries to make a close
friend
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.
Due to
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the cultural gap, some foreigners’ attitudes may not be appropriate to the native.
For instance
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, an American, who lives in Indonesia, usually speaks blatantly about someone or something without hesitation, which is so different from many Indonesians. In Indonesia, many
people
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may take a lot of consideration when delivering their words about someone.
As a result
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, Indonesian prefer to opt for the same Indonesian as
his
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close
friend
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because he is more comfortable sharing his personal issue.
Moreover
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, living in a
country
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where we have to speak a foreign
language
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may
cause
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a practical
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problem
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problems
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,
such
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as some
sign
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languages
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that are understandable only
for
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the native
people
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. A
country
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usually has a long history with the various economic, social, and
religion
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backgrounds that can shape its national
language
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.
For example
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, there are some
sign
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languages
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in Bali where many religious sites are located that Bali/Indonesia
people
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may only understand. These
sign
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languages
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disallow
people
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to take a nude
picture
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pictures
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in front of some places, but the foreigner may not know.
Consequently
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, foreigners will face a serious
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problem
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problems
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,
such
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as having a penalty cost or even will be deported. In conclusion, I agree that living in a
country
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where we have to speak a foreign
language
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can
cause
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a serious social
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problem
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problems
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,
such
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as trying to make a close
friend
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and a practical
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problem
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problems
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,
such
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as do not know some
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sign
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signs
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of
languages
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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