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Many People say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reason and example to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In the past few years, nature has faced a degradation with the technology advancement and the rise in the number of global brands. I firmly agree with the notion that because of the growing numbers, pollution has degraded our environment to the worst condition. Earlier people used to depend on local resources for their survival but now anyone can order whatever they want from anywhere in the world.
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 these commodities have made our life easier apply it has an unfavourable impact on Earth. To meet up with living standards, we utilise a lot of products manufactured by different organisations. With the growing number of factories, air pollution has reached its highest level in recent years. Globalization has increased the quality of life which had people
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rely more on technology which lead to
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 in demand for products. In order to fulfil these demands these big corporations have established mega manufacturing plants leading to harmful effects on soil, air and water. Climate change,
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 term has become quite popular these days. In the United Nations Assemblies, everyone is blaming each other for harsh weather which is a result of changes in the natural cycles of the earth by us humans. The increasing sea water temperature
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 and melting of glaciers to holes in the ozone layer of the stratosphere are all results of increased worldwide trade fulfilling local demands.
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, globalization has made our life comfortable
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we have to face its impacts in the upcoming future.
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