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The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.

The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.
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The table gives information about the amount of
money
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 in developing
countries
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 by the
USA
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, EU
countries
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 and other
countries
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 from 2006 to 2010. In general, It is noticeable that the figure for
money
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 in these developing
countries
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 witnessed a dramatic growth during the whole
periods
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period
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 shown. The
USA
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 which had
amount
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the amount
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 of
money
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 hit the highest point in 2010. There was a 3.1 of
million
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millions
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 of dollars in the year 2006 in the EU. In the first year, the figure
of
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for
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money
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 in the
USA
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 started at 9.8. In the next four years, that in the
USA
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 and EU was a rocket with figures of 20.3, and 4.1 respectively.
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 the total
of
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apply
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money
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 in the
USA
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peak
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peaked
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 at 20.3 in 2010. The
least
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last
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 figure for
money
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 was the Other
countries
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 in the year 2006. The total of
money
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 in Other
countries
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 had risen to 3.5 by 2008, which was a decline to 3.2 in 2009.
At the end
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 of
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the years
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years
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year
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, a significant increase to 3.7 was seen in the amount of
money
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 in Other
countries
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, countries, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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