The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.

The table gives information about the amount of money in developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.
The table gives information about the amount of
money
in developing
countries
by the
USA
, EU
countries
and other
countries
from 2006 to 2010. In general, It is noticeable that the figure for
money
in these developing
countries
witnessed a dramatic growth during the whole
periods
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shown. The
USA
which had
amount
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the amount
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of
money
hit the highest point in 2010. There was a 3.1 of
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of dollars in the year 2006 in the EU. In the first year, the figure
of
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money
in the
USA
started at 9.8. In the next four years, that in the
USA
and EU was a rocket with figures of 20.3, and 4.1 respectively.
Therefore
the total
of
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money
in the
USA
peak
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at 20.3 in 2010. The
least
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figure for
money
was the Other
countries
in the year 2006. The total of
money
in Other
countries
had risen to 3.5 by 2008, which was a decline to 3.2 in 2009.
At the end
of
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, a significant increase to 3.7 was seen in the amount of
money
in Other
countries
.
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