The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the sun.
The diagram demonstrates how the
heat
from the sun stays in the atmosphere. The Use synonyms
heat
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energy
comes from the sun, and the other Use synonyms
heat
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energy
comes from the activities of people. Some part of the Use synonyms
heat
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energy
reflects the space, but some are not. Some of it stays on the earth in the atmosphere, and it is trapped in the greenhouse. Use synonyms
Then
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heat
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energy
will be used.
Human activities Use synonyms
such
as cutting trees, transportation, using private vehicles, and the process of factory production are the reasons that cause greenhouse gases.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
heat
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energy
comes from the sun, and the other Use synonyms
heat
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energy
comes from the activities of people. Some of the Use synonyms
heat
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energy
reflects in the space, and some is trapped in the greenhouse. The Use synonyms
heat
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energy
can be used for doing something elseUse synonyms
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