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Your friend was supposed to visit you soon, but due to some personal problems you can’t meet him / her on the specified date. Write a letter to him or her explaining the situation. In your letter, you have to: – Apologise to your friend. – Explain why it’s not possible to meet now. – Suggest an alternative date for the meeting.

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Dear Anjali, How are you ? I hope you are doing well I apologise to you because of some kind
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personal problem I can not meet with you on the second of July which was our meeting date . Actually, I want to meet with you on the same date but suddenly my younger sister's to be sick she is suffering from a higher grade of fever and loose stool
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 she is extremely weak
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 I can not leave alone her in
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 condition . Now , I want to tell you about our next alternative date will be on the seventh of July and I hope my younger sister gets well soon and I apologise again. I hope you will understand my situation , Best Regards , Kamaldeep
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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